This week we are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog. The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences. After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described. It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion.
1. Beautiful sights where ever I look!
2. Wonderful sea animals to swim with!
3. Cool costumes to wear when dancing for special events!
4. Kids and adults playing together and swimming!
5. Fun for any age of people!
6. Big creature and small all around you!
Can you try and guess what or where it is ?
Also My good friend Cassie has posted hers but because she has no blog she will post it on mine
Here is her work
This week we are working on using descriptive language by sharing
This week we are working on using descriptive language by sharing
our writing straight onto our blog.
It would be cool if you could comment on both our work !!!!!!!!!
The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences.
After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described.
It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion.
- The water is blue.
- The blue bright sky.
- The brown soft sand.
- I can see the bright green trees.
- There is are white boat on the water.
- White bright fluffy clouds.
It would be cool if you could comment on both our work !!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteHi I am Sophie from Awahono School. Amaya, is the answer for your writing, beach? Cassie, is the answer Cook Islands? I like how you wrote the texture and the colour on both of the descriptions.
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