Improving comments

Aloha Bloggers! Today for cybersmart we have been improving our comments. We had to comment on a buddy's  blog. My buddy was Isra. Once we had finished we had to comment on a different school's blog. After the session we had to SMRF a drawing that was about how to improve a comment. First we had to insert our comment into the top rectangle then we had to check if we had done all the things that are used to get a good comment. Under that we had to write a better version of the comment that had all the thing's that are used to get a better comment.           Here is my work 

What I changed 

In my improved comment, I added some better words that would make the comment make more scene. I also changed what I normally say to some different words like instead of "see my blog" I did "check my blog" and instead of saying "I really liked" I write "I enjoyed."

Reflection 

I found this work hard and easy I found it hard because I had to think of different words that would still make sense. The easy bit was that what we had to have in the comment was right there as well as the other comment. 


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